Tim met the love of his life in high school. She was absolutely breathtaking; she had long blonde hair and a megawatt smile that just communicated absolute joy, the beauty of her spirit. It was like the sun itself had manifested as this really hot girl.

Her name was Lauren.
It was passionate, those early days. Tim was completely bowled over by just how much he felt for Lauren. He would feverishly write poems, compelled to get the flow of his thoughts down on paper. It was like there was nothing that could really capture the absolute depth of his feeling for her. And she just opened her heart to him and whatever he had to give, however he was moved to give it. He just couldn’t believe he was ‘with’ her.
Tim didn’t know it, but he came from a long line of robots; men who never shared their emotions. For years he had been fighting for a deep connection with his father and for years he had been failing at it. No matter how hard he tried, no matter how much he did, he couldn’t wring so much as a “good job” out of Daddy Roboto. Little Tim didn’t understand – for him to feel was to breathe – how his father could be so cold; so remote. He felt rejected. He felt somehow wrong.
Teenage Tim was staggered by the full acceptance and love Lauren had for him. For this first time in his life he really had someone who received the full force of his feeling and he scrambled to find ways to express it once the gates were open. And for a long while the awesome nature of his first love made the world seem right for once. He felt like he fit; he had a place.
It was easy to concentrate on his love for Lauren at first. It was so pure, so unassailable. He knew that as long as he had breath in his being, he would be filled with love for her. He pushed his feeling of rejection into the deep recesses of his mind but his heart - his heart - he had no control over. While Tim didn’t even graduate high school (”Why bother?” the voice of poison planted by his father would say. “You’ll never amount to anything.”), Lauren excelled scholastically.

She came from a ‘good’ family and made all the right moves. She eased into the world of adulthood with little problem. And, yet again, Tim started to feel rejected. Unintentionally her poise and successes underlined his perceived failure. He would never be good enough. And he started to resent her…but secretly, so secretly, he didn’t dare admit it to himself.
He made plans to marry his beautiful beloved and as he went through the ceremony he thought his heart would burst from sheer joy. Seeing her walk down the aisle was almost surreal; he couldn’t believe that the day – this day – he was marrying the girl of his dreams. It seemed like the beginning of a whole new life, a life of accomplishment and happiness; the beginning of his dreams.

But the years started to wear on him. Though he advanced in the company he worked for, the men he worked with were jaded and bitter. Men who felt betrayed by the promise of their youth, who wearied under their responsibilities; men who longed for freedom. Where once these men had seemed comically bitter, their poison seeped into that dark place in his soul. The place planted by the unthinking, callous rejection of his father.
Instead of being the beginning of his life, his marriage started to seem like the end of it. The responsibilities of being a husband ‘good enough’ for his beloved, a father ‘good enough’ for his beautiful daughters started to weigh on him. Because he secretly felt he wasn’t worthy, wouldn’t ever be ‘good enough’, he never thought to stand up to his young bride. She assumed he was making all the mistakes because, in his heart, he believed it. He was working 80 hour weeks just to come home as a failure.
He started by disengaging from his family. He watched tv but mostly, mostly, played videogames. Soon playing videogames began to consume his time. He could be found playing videogames when he was ‘watching the kids’ or in the early hours of the morning when he should have been nestled beside the companion of his days.
The he started drinking because, at first, it made him feel better. Except that it stopped making him feel better. He was angry; at himself, at his wife, at the responsibilities – the never-ending responsibilities – of adulthood. He was angry at his lot in life and he was angry that he would never be ‘good enough’. This anger, the fear and shame and sadness that he had tucked away since childhood, started to creep out. At least when he was angry he felt in control. He wasn’t a victim. At least when he was angry, people had to worry about whether they were pleasing him enough…even if it was the people he adored the most in this world.
Events finally came to a head, Lauren just didn’t know what she could do to fix everything and get the Tim she married back. So she left. She packed up her and the girls and not only left the town, not only left the state, but she put like 2500 miles between them.
At first he felt a little relieved. He tried to tell himself that he didn’t want all that responsibility and things were better this way. At least no one was constantly harping on him. But those bitter guys at work didn’t really care and he was lonelier than ever. His missed his beautiful wife and beautiful girls; he wanted his family back. He started making efforts to please her. He’d show up to an AA meeting and then proudly tell her, but was puzzled by Lauren’s lack of enthusiasm. He didn’t understand why that wasn’t ‘enough’ for her. And so he went back down the well of self-loathing and unworthiness.
What he didn’t realize was that he was still searching for that approval that he never got from his father; having externalized his worth, he would never feel ‘worthy’. Finally he started to let things go. Maybe he couldn’t live the dream of being back with his family but he could be happy to know that they were happy.
Though Lauren warily allowed him to keep in touch, his children became – once again - a source of joy for him. Where before he felt the agony of responsibility for having to care for them, he now felt he would never take them for granted again. Their voice on the phone elated him, and he allowed himself to – again – delight in the essence of their beings. He began to truly enjoy his daughters.

He kept at it, he was persistent – he talked and read – he ate, slept, and breathed this change. He could now clearly see that the bitter road of resentment and anger would only lead to the death of his soul. He, too, would become a robot. As he found family, he too found his connection to the Ultimate Father – the God of his understanding. And this Father, this Father accepted him as he was. This Father told him “How could you be broken when I myself have made you? How could you not be ‘enough’ when you are my Son? When I myself have loved the depth of your spirit?”
Lauren finally allowed herself to trust that the change she was seeing was real. That he was joyfully resigned to merely experiencing the joy of his family on the phone. That the poems he began to write again were real and coming from his truest self. No longer was he living to please her, no longer was she the arbiter of whether he was worthy, no longer was he blaming anyone but himself.
And she allowed herself to hope.
Recently, he drove cross-country to be reunited with his family. And, of all the strangest of things that can happen, his father drove with him. His father, not a robot, but a man who managed – finally – to be there for his son.

It won’t be easy, this reintegration. But wherever there is love, there is a chance. Whenever he realizes the depths of his feelings for Lauren and his children, there is a chance. Whenever he rejoices in their presence instead of feeling its burden, there is a chance. And however long he writes her poetry, there will always be a chance…






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August 26, 2008 at 6:13 pm
SanityFound
Really and truly speechless, wow wait WOW that was truly one of the most beautiful things I have read so full of hope and happies, lessons and human spirit, forgiveness and love…
Never give up fight for what you believe in or what you want for as long as you are fighting and striving for it there is a chance … so true!
My turn today to say … You go GF, you totally ROCK!
hayden tompkins says:
Thank you!
How’s it feel to be on the ‘other’ side of the story this time?
August 26, 2008 at 6:20 pm
Bob Iger
It’s a beautiful story… I wonder if it’s based on real-life events though.
hayden tompkins says:
It is. And I am feeling a little guilty since I didn’t run it by Tim before I posted it. But if Tim doesn’t like what I’ve written, I’ll pull it down. And if he wants something edited or tweaked, I’ll do that too.
I tend to write the stories of the people I know. They often have no idea how what they are doing is inspirational, no clue that their struggles and consequent triumphs are incredible. These people really are everywhere. You just have to open your heart a little bit.
Besides, all good fiction is actually based in reality.
August 26, 2008 at 7:25 pm
cory huff
Beautiful Hayden. Thanks for the story. It brightened my day a lot.
hayden tompkins says:
August 26, 2008 at 7:35 pm
SanityFound
… sneaky just dropping that line in there and dumbfounding me huh huh punk! My brain still does wth’s on last week… this side is much better, I get to cheer and do pom pom dances and well yeah
August 26, 2008 at 8:13 pm
The Common Man
Hey Hayden,
I was very moved by the story you told. I wish all men (including myself) could stop seeking validation through others and learn to be happy with what will make them happy, if that makes any sense. And that we all realize how fortunate we all are to have people who love us and reciprocate.
hayden tompkins says:
I find it amazing how much fathers really impact a child’s sense of themselves. A lot of people don’t like when The Art of Manliness crew talk about ‘manliness’ from the perspective of marriage and fatherhood. I wonder how those folks would think about how ‘manliness’ is directly related to how a boy interacts with his father.
August 26, 2008 at 8:27 pm
mssc54
Hayden; this is all too familiure…
I have come to understand that you can’t really blame older fathers for being so detached and almost cold. They don’t see it as their job to be all lovey-dovey to their children. Especially if these men are the same men who lived through the Great Depression. Their job is to support their family. That is the only way they know to show their love.
This post has inspired me to post “My Angel Story” which I have never done publically before.
Thanks for allowing me to remember again.
hayden tompkins says:
I agree. The father in question, however, didn’t really financially support his kids much, as they lived with their mother. (This is pre-regular child support, and definitely pre-alimony.) But it definitely might be a reason why he was so unfeeling towards his progeny.
August 27, 2008 at 12:00 am
Laurie
This is a beautiful story, Hayden. The husband in the story reminds me of my own. He never got the love and validation from his dad either. I dont think his dad ever said he was proud of my guy. So my hub doesn’t feel worthy of me or of happiness. When you said, “He was working 80 hour weeks just to come home as a failure.” that sounded so familar.
My guy is better these days as he understands how crazy his dad is, but there are a lot of scares that get in the way.
Keep up the wonderful writing girl!
hayden tompkins says:
Laurie, thank you so much!
It never ceases to amaze me how important a father’s recognition of his son is…no matter how old the son is, that follows him. Your husband is lucky that you are patient and willing to work with him.
August 27, 2008 at 12:21 am
mssc54
Hayden; my mellowed as he got older. He told me stories of how (as a boy) he would ride a horse to deliver breakfast in buckets to the hands working in the sugar fields. The sugar cane fields were owned by the family across the road. So my dad considered himself lucky to have a source of income for the family. Especially one that he could do before going to school every day.
August 27, 2008 at 1:41 am
marlajayne
Moving and beautiful. I hope things continue to work out for this family. It’s amazing how things that happen in earlier generations continue to affect the future ones until a transitional person comes along who wakes up and changes things.
When reading this post, I kept thinking of this little book (big surprise) entitled The Language of Letting Go by Melody Beattie. There’ s SO MUCH good stuff in it, and tonight what I’m thinking about is her frequent reminder that everyone deserves the very best that life and love have to offer. Some people just have a harder time believing that than others.
hayden tompkins says:
I really think the whole generation of brothers will be a transitional generation. …though it’s hard when you idolize your parents and they reject you. That foundation is very hard to overcome.
Seriously, where is your ‘recommended reading list’?! I may as well get all of these books out of the way.
August 27, 2008 at 3:44 pm
tim
this is the poem I wrote for Lauren… Enjoy.
-My Angel-
Some time ago I lost my way
Lost sight of the one true meaning
Living life only for today
Outside tough but inside screaming
Having everything to lose I
Struggled with my inner demons
Depression I was consumed by
Excuses soon became reasons
With life collapsing all around
I sank deeper into despair
While crying without tears or sound
I was convinced no one did care
The bottle I worshipped did not
Benefit me or satisfy
Without the answers that I sought
To sad to live to scared to die
She gave me only one last chance
Just when I thought all hope was lost
Break free from the grip of this trance
Now no matter how much the cost
Admit I must I am diseased
Seek help I must to find the cure
No longer will I live displeased
This time I’ll win of this I’m sure
To fail is not part of the plan
Keeping my goals within my sight
I’ll stay sober because I can
While making all the wrong things right
My faith in God and Jesus too
Will lead me on this path of mine
The sun will rise each morning new
And in their hands I’ll be just fine
With prayer at night I wake refreshed
My hope renewed, my heart in place
Ready to take each day’s new test
A brand new smile upon my face
A new commitment in my life
Has opened my blind eyes to see
My angel is also my wife
God bless her soul for saving me
-Tim-
hayden tompkins says:
Wow, I am honored that you would share this. It’s incredible.
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August 27, 2008 at 7:20 pm
Kip de Moll
Such a great story that validates all that I’m writing about, only you just did it in one post. It’s wonderful how people are taking the opportunity to open themselves to find acceptance and support.
It is our job to pass these lessons on to our sons. It’s the best and most immediate way to make the world a better place.
hayden tompkins says:
Opening yourself takes so much courage because you literally have to fight your ego to do so. Ego is a hard demon to get out of the way.
August 28, 2008 at 1:27 pm
froggywoogie
Unease from childhood, hidden deep inside of us can be so destructive and still playing up once as an adult.
This story is heart touching
hayden tompkins says:
‘Unease’ is an interesting choice of words. But you are right, it is touching.
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